Fail Song
I tried to make it light and include some funny. Anyway, my professor told me to try writing poetry in Spanglish, and my first attempt is looking more like a salsa/merengue song. I fail. Help me make it suck less.La food es vidaCan't live sin comidaBut la soup ya no haySoldado spoon me a lieSays the capitano:'Estoy aqui for your good'Answers the campechano:'Por quĂ© you take my food?'My work es mi vidaCuando la tierra es my ownPero tuviste que come alongAnd now mi vida es doneAhora tengo que work for youSo I can eat just migajasY encima de everythingYou also took mi mujerY no hay nada que I can doWhat´s left for me es pajasSolito in my lin tintinNow I´m really en la verg
8 comments:
you can include things like
MMMMMMM mista lova lovaaa...
im tellin' ya, dis is shaggy
oh carolinaaa
MMMMMM
el rock es negro nena
la nena es negra
It looks like a cheap version of Charlie and Hash.
How to make it better? write a new one...
Well, in part because I was trying to keep it clean. Maybe I should find a way to let loose a little more... I'll scrap this and try something else.
I'm digging it. Next C&H is gonna feature spoken word by you, meng!
That's how I proposed to Christina.
Plagiarist scum.
Rat, you're commenting on the wrong post. Your several proposals to Christina (and their generally gruesome outcomes) are detailed in the video above this post.
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